you are selling yourself short. these drawings are simply and ineffectively done. you can communicate in a more well articulated fashion, i have already seen it. think of the story that you are telling with your presentation : a set of design proposals along an untended railway. where are the proposals? how do they relate to one another spatially? programatically? where are the speculations as to how they will be constructed and how do they fit in with the existing context?
what are these details? what are they showing? why is nothing labeled? how does it fit into the project?
this is a drawing of an idea. ok, so how does it work? make yourself believe it through a drawing. make someone want to climb it. elevations. section details. how could these bricks be supported by fixings and the existing wall?
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